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[نادیا]

پاسخ : class room

I dont wanna mention the above texts written by friends again.I think singer's {singers'}{the ' is after s 'cus it's plural}value is alot.People need to have sth to listen that describes their feelings.Maybe its love,passion, depression,maybe critisizm,protest or ...So each song has its own subject.People always appeal to listen to those singers which their sounds or their ways of singing or lyrics are according to their feelings.For instance kind of music rap is popular between teenagers and youngs{young}[young is adj & If u wanna use it as a noun,must put the before it & use it as a plural noun,so there will be no S] these days cause they describe young's protests or if its about love it usually describes people's feeling about love.But these days we usually hear some kind of craps instead of a song.As a matter of fact they are also popular in our society though.So these phony singers earn money alot{earn a lot of money}[If the sentence had been finished & it was correct to use a lot at the end but here is not correct] that they dont deserve it.

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[جیران]

پاسخ : class room

and what do you think about it?
sing for money
is it bad?​

 

[fire storm]

پاسخ : class room

no it's not bad
it's a job

Mistakes in Punctuation marks
But grammatically correct​

 

[mahdad]

پاسخ : class room

i think any body{anybody}[There's no space between any & body] that they{who} don't{doesn't}know any think{anything-no Space-G instead of K} about singing they shouldn't sing and share it in{On} internet {The internet}and i think any body should have job Assurance my mean is{I mean}[mean as a noun has a different meaning] this that{}[Should be omittetd] they don't sing just for the money

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[نادیا]

پاسخ : class room

Actually they like singing but money enhance{enhances} their desire more.

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[جیران]

پاسخ : class room

and i think some of them wanna be famous​

 

[Narcissus]

پاسخ : class room

and i think some of them wanna be famous​

yep,actually,this might be the most important reason for being a singer or even an actor/actress.
Many people like to be famous & rich so they decide to be a singer.I think the people who really like music and fame,become successful singers;'Cuz they enjoy their life by doing they're favorite activity, Besides,they become famous & rich!​

 

[جیران]

پاسخ : class room

yep,actually,this might be the most important reason for being a singer or even an actor/actress.
Many people like to be famous & rich so they decide to be a singer.I think the people who really like music & fame,become successful singers;'Cuz they enjoy their life by doing they're favorite activity, Besides,they become famous & rich!​

I was just waiting u, to say so, thanks narges\
because when u like an activity you try for it and for sure u'll be successful[/color][/left​

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[newthink]

پاسخ : class room

and what do you think about it?
sing for money
is it bad?​

As I said this is so bad..because it decrease{decreases} the value of singers and musics{music}[music is uncountable]..But if you are a good singer that everyone likes your voice and because of that you earn a big amount of money I think that`s {that}[no 's is needed]your right and there`s nothing wrong about that​

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[Narcissus]

پاسخ : class room

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