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[shershere]

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Come on,if you don't understand a word,take a look at your dictionaries! :)
Perspective: point of view,idea,opinion about sth​

I thought it's that expression in art!

 

[BLACK HOLE]

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oh!
i checked it but still didn't get the point!
can you ,yourself tell an example?
u mean how we think about life?

 

[sjazayeri]

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[BLACK HOLE]

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aha!
i got it...
tnx alot :-[...

 

[poorya.kh]

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ok I myself start it :
in my opinion life is beautiful thing
that can be more enjoyable by achieving my goals
and for achieving my goals and being successful I should try more and more
I think I'm such a optimist person so I'm so hopeful to future
and I think everything will get better
so we should forget all bad things and be happy and enjoy our life
that's all ​

 

[BLACK HOLE]

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i agree with you....in all aspects but i also think that:
life must be some thing more than eating..and do ordinary everyday works...
i think each person has a responsibility in his/her life that nobody else can do that!
and i also believe only way 2 end this way in a good way is using your mind!not others!
life some times may seem like a hell but it's sth that we can enjoy!
when u keep going forward u wold love yourself!

i can't all of my beliefes now!
i will tell remained ones later...

 

[sjazayeri]

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[ImanHD]

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Life..... It's going on , no stop, no place for just a short break.
I can see the life in a different view , how couldn't you enjoy the life with its all summits and valleys??
How could anyone possibly neglect the life ?
Everything is built in favour of us , privately.
Don't we wanna use them??
I'm living for the very time that I truly deserve the whole thing in my life.
And a repetitive sentence for me " Let Go Of Your Yesterday"


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[جیران]

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wow
welcome to our class Sjazayeri and Andromeda too
and im so happy that u are here imanHD & Poorya!
all of the paragraphs are great tnx and continue ​

 

[BLACK HOLE]

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Couldn't agree more! BUT​

I don not think of life ,as a whole, to be beautiful or anything of that kind.
Of course, you look around yourself, what you see is more or less at least acceptable.
But when someone mentions life, I think of Africa, I think of all the people with illnesses,
I think of pain, suffering. I do not deny the fact that there _is_ beauty in life, but in my opinion, when
considered as a whole, life isn't as beautiful as it may seem. As a matter of fact, were I given the choice
to destroy all conscious life, I would not hesitate a second to do it as I have reasons to believe that there would be far less suffering if there weren't any conscious life. I think the sum of all sufferings is greater than the sum of all beauties and pleasures.​

agree but ..........
sometimes i close my eyes....
i can't see sth...
they really bother me...
and make me cry....
so i prefer to live in my own life and sometimes don't think that there are other people!!
i know it's false and wrong but ..........
i think i'm not ready enough to believe these things!!!!
maybe.......
i'm going to open my eyes this summer..i'm trying to...

 

[Narcissus]

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WOW! I see many paragraphs.How come?
thanks all for participating in this class.
& thank you minaaaaa for the new topic.
you all know the rule,after some days,we start checking & correcting the paragraphs.
Good luck & hope to see more paragraphs. :)
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[جیران]

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WOW! I see many paragraphs.How come?
thanks all for participating in this class.
& thank you minaaaaa for the new topic.
you all know the rule,after some days,we start checking & correcting the paragraphs.
Good luck & hope to see more paragraphs. :)
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ur welcome special tnx to poorya!

 

[BLACK HOLE]

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again......no post!

 

[Narcissus]

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in my opinion life is (a) beautiful thing
that can be more enjoyable by achieving my goals
and for achieving my goals and being successful I should try more and more
I think I'm such a (an) optimist person so I'm so hopeful to(about) future
and I think everything will get better
so we should forget all bad things and be happy and enjoy our life
that's all ​

Thanks a lot for your nice paragraph.​

 

[Narcissus]

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i agree with you....in all aspects but i also think that:
life must be some thing (something-no space between some & thing-) more than eating..and do(doing)ordinary everyday works(work- This word is uncountable here.Anyway,It's better to use the plural form of the word activity instead of usingwork in the singular form-)...
i think each person has a responsibility in his/her life that nobody else can do(take) that!
and i also believe(the) only way 2 end this way in a good way is using your mind!(whatcha mean?This sentence is not ENG!!It's the exact translation from Persian into Eng & it doesn't make sense! not others!
life some times (sometimes)may seem like a hell but it's sth that we can enjoy!
when u keep going forward u wold(will/simple present) love yourself!

i can't tell all of my beliefes(beliefs) now!
it will tell remained ones later...

Thank you so much for participating in this class. :)​

 

[Narcissus]

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Couldn't agree more! BUT​

I do not think of life ,as a whole, to be beautiful or anything of that kind.
Of course, you look around yourself, what you see is more or less at least acceptable.
But when someone mentions life, I think of Africa, I think of all the people with illnesses,
I think of pain, suffering. I do not deny the fact that there _is_ beauty in life, but in my opinion, when
considered as a whole, life isn't as beautiful as it may seem. As a matter of fact, were I given the choice
to destroy all conscious life, I would not hesitate a second to do it as I have reasons to believe that there would be far less suffering if there weren't any conscious life. I think the sum of all sufferings is greater than the sum of all beauties and pleasures.​

Thanks for your great paragraph. ​

 

[sjazayeri]

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[EhsanJ]

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Life is a video game... a game that u cant save. if you lose you cannot go back and fix it. If you die you can't come back to life. and if you love and you get your heart broken by someone, there ain't gonna be a cure. x
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[Narcissus]

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Well, when I say "at least acceptable", it means that it isn't worse than acceptable(i.e. bad).
I don't see how it doesn't make sense. It may sound odd in combination with "more or less", but I don't think it is wrong.
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Yea,I didn't say it was wrong.It doesn't seem nice 'cuz of the combination of more or less with at least.
As you know,more or less has different meanings:1.mostly 2.approximately 3.very nearly
I just didn't get which of the above u meant.That's why I said "it doesn't make sense."
And I was thinking about this sentence:"what you see is at least more or less acceptable."
Is it what ur sentence says or not?
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[sjazayeri]

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