Classroom

[جیران]

hi my friends
in this topic we have a class,and have a free discussion like the english class but not like "let's talk" , we should make a group who wants to speak in this discussion, we have same subject ,& each members should say sth about it ,in each session we have a new subject and the members of the grope (students) must to say sth about that subject for example i said speak about sunset and the student should say a sentence about it their sentence must be true(Grammar and vocabulary) and after a 5 true sentence we'll give him/her 1+
and after 3 false sentence we'll give him/her 1 negative point
is anyone ready?​

 

[Narcissus]

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All the users who are ready to join this class,should write their real name in a post & then after the members were completed,we write all the names in one post & delete the others; then We Start the Class .
Thnx Mina for this Nice idea! ​

 

[جیران]

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ok
now we just have 7 members:
Newthink
killer_m
maral55
نادیا
mahdad
jamjam
fire storm
when we find 7 members we'll start the class
and thank you for your cooperation​

 

[Narcissus]

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can i join, to?

Yep,for sure. ​

Now,the members are enough...
Thnx everyone for cooperating.
We're gonna choose the topic.
​

:)

 

[mahdad]

پاسخ : class room

when?????????di:g

 

[Narcissus]

پاسخ : class room

when?????????di:g

After choosing the topic,We'll tell all the members. :)​

 

[جیران]

پاسخ : class room

ok my friends
our subject is singers
and we want to talk about the singer's job and what they do
pls start
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[fire storm]

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ok
they earn a lot of money
as a kid i liked to be a singer

singing is intresting
but i dont know if it is easy or not

But I don't know whether it is easy or not.​

One mistake​

 

[mahdad]

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hi friends i think all of the students in this class are girls and just i'm a boy by the way i spended{Spent} 20mintues for writing this answer :P

Singing is the act of producing musical sounds with the voice, and augments regular speech by the use of both tonality and rhythm. A person who sings is called a singer or vocalist. Singers perform music known as songs that can either be song a cappella (without accompaniment) or accompanied by musicians and instruments ranging from a single instrumentalist to a full symphony orchestra or big band. Singing is often done in a group of other musicians, such as in a choir of singers with different voice ranges, or in an ensemble with instrumentalists, such as a rock group or baroque ensemble :-&. Nearly anyone who can speak can sing, since in many respects singing is a form of sustained speech.​

and they earn alot of money just for their voice and most of them redaction their voice :) with computer and softwares

that's all

Two little mistakes​

 

[newthink]

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There are different kinds of musics{music}['cuz music is uncountable] with different kinds of singers...I guess these days every one{everyone has no space between any & one} pretends to be a singer..Even if they are not experts or graduated from art schools and universities..I see it as a disaster!Because the fake singers just ruin the beautiful musics{music}..That`s why most of the time I prefer to listen to a non-singer music..They just do it to earn more and more money!​

Two mistakes + one repeated mistake​

 

[نادیا]

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I dont wanna mention the above texts written by friends again.I think singer's {singers'}{the ' is after s 'cus it's plural}value is alot.People need to have sth to listen that describes their feelings.Maybe its love,passion, depression,maybe critisizm,protest or ...So each song has its own subject.People always appeal to listen to those singers which their sounds or their ways of singing or lyrics are according to their feelings.For instance kind of music rap is popular between teenagers and youngs{young}[young is adj & If u wanna use it as a noun,must put the before it & use it as a plural noun,so there will be no S] these days cause they describe young's protests or if its about love it usually describes people's feeling about love.But these days we usually hear some kind of craps instead of a song.As a matter of fact they are also popular in our society though.So these phony singers earn money alot{earn a lot of money}[If the sentence had been finished & it was correct to use a lot at the end but here is not correct] that they dont deserve it.

Three mistakes​

 

[جیران]

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and what do you think about it?
sing for money
is it bad?​

 

[fire storm]

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no it's not bad
it's a job

Mistakes in Punctuation marks
But grammatically correct​

 

[mahdad]

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i think any body{anybody}[There's no space between any & body] that they{who} don't{doesn't}know any think{anything-no Space-G instead of K} about singing they shouldn't sing and share it in{On} internet {The internet}and i think any body should have job Assurance my mean is{I mean}[mean as a noun has a different meaning] this that{}[Should be omittetd] they don't sing just for the money

Eight mistakes + A repeated mistake​

 

[نادیا]

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Actually they like singing but money enhance{enhances} their desire more.

One mistake​

 

[جیران]

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and i think some of them wanna be famous​

 

[Narcissus]

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and i think some of them wanna be famous​

yep,actually,this might be the most important reason for being a singer or even an actor/actress.
Many people like to be famous & rich so they decide to be a singer.I think the people who really like music and fame,become successful singers;'Cuz they enjoy their life by doing they're favorite activity, Besides,they become famous & rich!​

 

[جیران]

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yep,actually,this might be the most important reason for being a singer or even an actor/actress.
Many people like to be famous & rich so they decide to be a singer.I think the people who really like music & fame,become successful singers;'Cuz they enjoy their life by doing they're favorite activity, Besides,they become famous & rich!​

I was just waiting u, to say so, thanks narges\
because when u like an activity you try for it and for sure u'll be successful[/color][/left​

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[newthink]

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and what do you think about it?
sing for money
is it bad?​

As I said this is so bad..because it decrease{decreases} the value of singers and musics{music}[music is uncountable]..But if you are a good singer that everyone likes your voice and because of that you earn a big amount of money I think that`s {that}[no 's is needed]your right and there`s nothing wrong about that​

Three mistakes​

 

[Narcissus]

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×Please make your sentences as soon as possible...
ONLY one day is left for this subjects.
Tomorrow,at 9:00 PM,We'll choose the best correct sentences & give the writers a prize.!​